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No Tip by Rick Juliusson

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You are laughable at best !! Using google as a platform to try and hurt my business !! You sir are an embarrassment to your self as well as your daughter ! Shame on you for that ! I am blocking you so not waste your time trying to bully me any longer !! Soon you will be staring karma in the face .. when it happens think of me !

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Life is laughable at best!!  Try using laughter as a platform (!!), and you sir will never feel embarrassment as well as shame!  Do not waste your time bullying any longer !!  Soon you will be laughing with karma in the face .. when it happens think of me :) !

Bridgette Nofsinger